UC知道我的英语作文各位帮忙看一下有没有问题啊~~初一的~~
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/26 10:57:30
00,11,22代表人名，人名我就不打了啊
There are four children on the playground.00,11,22and i.00 is dancing now.Can she dance very well?Yes,she can.But four years ago,she could only dance a little.11 is singing.Five years ago,she could sing songs very well.And she still can sing songs very well now.22and i are playing Math Game.We must be careful.Because this game is diffcult.And 22isn't good at math.So she loses the Math Game.We are very happy and we all have a good time.
看在我那么辛苦打下来的份上，各位帮忙检查一下吧~~
There are four children on the playground.00,11,22and i.00 is dancing now.Can she dance very well?Yes,she can.But four years ago,she could only dance a little.11 is singing.Five years ago,she could sing songs very well.And she still can sing songs very well now.22and i are playing Math Game.We must be careful.Because this game is diffcult.And 22isn't good at math.So she loses the Math Game.We are very happy and we all have a good time.
看在我那么辛苦打下来的份上，各位帮忙检查一下吧~~
1"playgroung ''改为"playground''
2"But four years ago,she could only dance a little''改为"But four years ago,she could dance only a little''
Math Game不应该大写的说。。。
建议把And 22isn't good at math.So she loses the Math Game.改成：22 isn't good at math,so she loses the game.
为;"she could sing songs just a little''
difficult拼成了diffcult
math漏了s