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Winter holiday is too short.Often it less than one month.But I like it because I can rest,can be free,can go to many places.The most important I can celebrate the Spring Festival.
This winter holiday begins January 18th to February 13th.
Then there is twe days that I can’t forget.They are January 24th,January 28th.
Now,let me tell you the story about each days.
January 24th
That day I went home,before that day all the Naihai experiment school students learnd at winter camp.When we went out of the school gate,we shouted:“We are away from school,we are going home.”We were so happy,we took a holiday!
January 28th
That evening was eve of lunar New Year.Our families got together,had a big dinner.After the dinner I with my brother wished every people “Happy New Year.”Then we got money given to children as a lunar New Year gift.After it we Shoot off firecrackers. They are so nice.It is also believed that it will bring goo
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Often it less than one month-->
Often it is less than one month.
2 can go to many places-->
and can go to many places(并列句最后一成分前加 and)
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The most important I can ...-->
The most important thing is that I can...
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We were so happy,we took a holiday--->
We were so happy,we would take a holiday
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This winter holiday begins January 18th to February 13th--->
This winter holiday begins at January 18th and will end at February 13th
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They are January 24th,January 28th-->
They are January 24th and January 28th
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Our families got together,had a big dinner-->
Our families got together and had a big dinner
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After the dinner I with my brother -->
After the dinner my brother and I
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After it we Shoot off firecrackers-->
After that we let off firecrackers
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At seven forty-five