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many people who graduated from high school choose to go to work directly.however nowdays more and more ones are keep going to study in colleges or univeries for different ideas: to study much more knowledge or get more expreienced, easy to find a job in the future and more salaries,or others just parents let them in.
根下面这段比较如何呢
after graduating from high school many young peopkle have the option to directly enter the work force. most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs. they attend college to obtain more choices, high salaries,and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitively job market.
根下面这段比较如何呢
after graduating from high school many young peopkle have the option to directly enter the work force. most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs. they attend college to obtain more choices, high salaries,and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitively job market.
我觉得你上下两个结合一下更好些！下面是我组织并修改的，你看看怎么样：
After graduating from high school many young people have the option to go to work directly.however, at present, more and more people are keep going to further in the famous university for different ideas:
they enter the college to obtain more choice, and more opportunities for advancement in the increasing and competitive job market.
下面这段better than 上
下面的比上面的好