UC知道帮忙纠正语法错误。。
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以下是两篇英语日记。。帮忙纠正一下语法错误
谁纠正的语法错误最多，那么积分就送给谁。。谢谢了。
essay one ：
Today is a sunny day,the weather is so wonderful. I got up about 10 o'clock in the morning.The first thing came to my mind was to land on the CFAN to irrigate.But i have to go and brush my teeth and clean my face.After have done this,i begin to surf the interent.Just a quarter-hour later,the doorbell rang,i opened the door and saw a nice girl standing in the out of door.She seemed to be a friend of my.However,i could't remember her.She said to me:"is this yours,i saw it in the traffic road and brought it to you."Hearing this,i was really shocked.And she passed the Identify Card to me which has benn lost for nearly a month.I invited her to have lunch together and she agreed.THe matter made me aware of that love is subsistent everywhere.
Later in the afternoon,when i was surfing the Interent,i found there was something wrong with my monitor. Immediately i took i
谁纠正的语法错误最多，那么积分就送给谁。。谢谢了。
essay one ：
Today is a sunny day,the weather is so wonderful. I got up about 10 o'clock in the morning.The first thing came to my mind was to land on the CFAN to irrigate.But i have to go and brush my teeth and clean my face.After have done this,i begin to surf the interent.Just a quarter-hour later,the doorbell rang,i opened the door and saw a nice girl standing in the out of door.She seemed to be a friend of my.However,i could't remember her.She said to me:"is this yours,i saw it in the traffic road and brought it to you."Hearing this,i was really shocked.And she passed the Identify Card to me which has benn lost for nearly a month.I invited her to have lunch together and she agreed.THe matter made me aware of that love is subsistent everywhere.
Later in the afternoon,when i was surfing the Interent,i found there was something wrong with my monitor. Immediately i took i
It's a sunny day today.
got up at about
but I had to
after that
I bigan to
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你错得连片，看看该用过去式的你用了吗？
全改出来要累死我。
把你的邮箱给我，我慢慢改，改完发给你。
浩大的工程啊！
你这样说不好,后面回答的人肯定比前面纠正的错误多.
你说是吗?