英语翻译(自我介绍,可以出点修改意见的也请帮忙提,谢)

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面试官您好,我叫张文静,现年22岁。我目前是华东理工大学的大三学生,专业是自动化。我将在明年的六月拿到我的毕业证书。我出生在上海,也在上海长大,是个地道的上海人。我的求学之路是十分坎坷的。在初二的时候,我的成绩并不好,班级48人,我排名36,但是也在这个时候我逐渐了解了学习的重要性,开始认真学习。在中考时,我是班级第12名,勉强考入了高中。在高中我更加努力的读书,终于以年级第一的成绩考入了一本大学,我也是我们高中唯一一个考入一本大学的学生。在大学里,我认真读书,积极的参加学生工作,我在学生会的公关部里工作了2年,曾经成功的举办过电脑装机大赛,并为此次活动找到了校外的赞助。因为我家并不富裕,所以我在闲暇的时间里会找一些零工做,来贴补家用。在大二下我成为海文教育集团的校园代理,辅助海文做宣传和代为收费报名。在工作中为公司设想,曾提议过一些适应校园的宣传方法。也许是因为在我的成长之路上有那么多的曲折,我从小就有不服输的精神,也可以适应各种恶劣的环境。我相信我可以适应贵公司的工作环境并很快的可以独立工作,希望您能我机会成为贵公司的一员,谢谢。
我是想先写多点然后再改下,希望谁先帮忙翻译下,谢谢了
我应聘的是实习的职位,估计会比较详细的面,所以我写简历上没有的中学的经历

翻译的似乎有点出入啊...兄弟...有些地方不对或者少动词...哪位帮忙再改改啊...

The surface examination official hello, I call open gently, presentage 22 years old. I at present am the East China technicaluniversity's big three students, specialized is the automation. I willattain my diploma in the next year in June. I am born in Shanghai,also grows up in Shanghai, is the typical Shanghai people. I study theroad am extremely rough. In second day time, my result is notcertainly good, the class and grade 48 people, I place 36, but also atthis time I had gradually understood the study importance, startsearnestly to study. Tests when the center, I am class and grade 12th,reluctantly had been admitted the high school. In the high school Ieven more diligently studying, finally had been admitted by the gradefirst result a university, I also am our high school only 11 wasadmitted a university's student. In the university, I earnestly study,the positive participation student works, I have worked for 2 years instudent association's public relations department