英语该错：

英语该错：John used to be my friend a few years before（这里应该是ago）.（But now,)He isn't my friend any more（是anymore,一个单词）.A few years ago he is(was,过去时态） poor.Now he's rich.When i knew him,he wore on（把on删去，不需要） shabby clothes ,（he)was very thin or(and,不是or) lived in a small flat. He rode a(用his,因为他特定的自行车） bicycle. He was a(an) art student. He always said:"Some day I'm going to do（be或者become,do是错误的) a great artist!" Then he met Mary.She had(has,她爸没死，不是过去时） a very rich father .John married with（with去掉） her. Now he wears expensive cloth（复数clothes) ,is rather fat and lives in a huge house .He drives a fast sports car. Now he says:"Some day i'm to be (the)Prime Minister!"Oh,well. Life is (加上too,强调）good for some people.

（好了，上面有括号的地方是语法或者单词用错的，下面我把正确的已经经过修改的给你哦！^-^)

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John used to be my friend a few years ago. But now,he isn't my friend anymore. A few years ago