麻烦高人帮我看下哪个英文版本好?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/13 04:49:35
今天是我自认长大以后,第一次幸福的起床,这种感觉简直太好了!昨天,我跑到奶奶那里,把奶奶拉到了我的房间,陪我待了一整天。尽管和奶奶没有聊上几句,奶奶就在我的床上睡着了,可是只要她待在我的旁边,我就感觉好踏实。后来奶奶回去了,因为之前我忙了很多自己的事情,很累,便睡着了。直到现在醒来,竟是带着甜甜的幸福,我真的失去这种感觉好久了。我突然感到好怕,就像一句话,未曾拥有不曾失去。

版本一:Today is I confessed after coarsening, first happy getting out of bed, this kind of feeling too was simply good! Yesterday, I ran to paternal grandmother there, pulled paternal grandmother my room, accompanied me to treat one all day.Although has not chatted with paternal grandmother several, paternal grandmother on has fallen asleep on mine bed, but so long as she treats in mine side, I feel well steadfast.Afterwards paternal grandmother went back, because before I busy very many own matter, very tired, then fell asleep.Until now wakes, unexpectedly is having the sweet happiness, I really lost this kind of feeling for a long time.I felt suddenly feared, looks like a speech, not had not once loses.

版本二:Today I consider myself grown up, the first to get up in happiness, this

第一个版本最烂,都是错误,是机器译出来的吧!

第二个版本一般,可以勉强读通。

第三个版本最好,造句的衔接和用词都比较到位,属于佳作,值得赞赏!

第三版,