哪位英语高手帮我看看我写的语法对不对,不对的帮我指正呀,多谢啦

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HELLO,My dear teacher, I am glad to introduce myself for you,my name is ***, I Come from *** and it is a beautiful city ,I am 21 years old, I like computer becauseI like surf on line , I am easy going, so I like make friend , NOW, I work in hoau,I am a office worker, I thing I am wonderful! That’s all thanks !

1.introduce myself to you

2.because i like surfing on line

introduce myself to you
so I like making friend
写的一般
这些只是有错误的地方
还有好多不妥的地方

1 introduce myself for you--introduce myself to you
2 like surf ---like surfing
3 I like make friend --I like making friends
4 I thing --I think

1、introduce myself to you 向别人介绍,引出对象用to
2、because I like surfing on line. like doing或like to do .一般爱好用前一种,后一种是短暂性的
3、I like making friends. 同上.
4、I am an office worker. 元音前用an要注意

introduce myself to you
so I like making friend

introduce to
like doing
make friends 较妥