有没grammar错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/11 05:17:16
我希望你能把我们牢记在心,同时我期望能跟你们公司建立一种良好的合作关系

I hope you will keep us in mind and look forward to establishing a friendly co-operation relationship with your company

你就说We've been looking forward to establishing a business relationship with your company. 前面那句多余, 而且不符合英文的习惯. 商务英语要简洁明了。

good~~

I hope we can always be kept/born in your mind and look forward to establishing a friendly co-operation relationship with your company

翻译的很好啊

正确