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程序部申请周末为全体员工开一个电脑安全讲座。
Program Department applys to hold a lecture of computer safe.
内容及目的:让全体职工认识典型的病毒及其入侵方式,提高警惕和安全防范;还会提出公司安全防范的其他措施。
Content and Purpose: Make each employee knows typical viruses and ways they invade the computer.
时间:本周末。讲座时间大约三十分钟。
Time: End of this week. The time of lecture may last half an hour.
形式:可以一个部门一个部门讲;可能的话,全体职工一起开效率最高。
Form: It could be held in each department. But if could, it is better thet be held in all the employees.

Program Department applys to hold a lecture of computer safe.(of---about)

Content and Purpose: Make each employee knows typical viruses and ways they invade the computer.(Make---To make/Making)

Time: End of this week. The time of lecture may last half an hour.(End of this week---This weekend/The end of this weekend, lecture---the lecture)

Form: It could be held in each department. But if could, it is better thet be held in all the employees.(if could---if possible,it is better thet---it is better to)