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I don't konw how to describe my mood,looking at others of serious drive,but i have no same points with them:surfing on internet ,strolling.Perhaps I don't think about anything of me.I even don't know why do I come to the world,muddling along,i want now is joy,think about the future things in the future.
This is me,both of my parents,friends ,schoolmates,teachers don't think i can be successful.but i don't think so,and i'm not grieved about they thought.I born for myself.I happy for myself.I happy I laugh,sad I cry.As if cry and laugh can hold all world.I'm contented.
Don't to fret you hearts,my friends.Tell you a famous remark：“If by life you were deceived, Don't be dismal, don't be wild! In the day of grief, be mild Merry days will come, believe.

修改后如下：

I don't konw how to describe my mood. While looking at others of serious drive,I have no same points with them:surfing on the internet ,strolling.Perhaps I don't care about anything of me.I even don't know why I came to the world,muddling along. All I want now is joy,and thinking about the future things in the future.
This is me,and all of my parents,friends ,schoolmates,teachers don't think I can become successful, however, I don't think so. And I'm not grieved about what they thought of me.I was born for myself.I feel happy for myself.If I feel happy I laugh,and sad I cry.As if tears and laughter can hold all world.I'm contented.
Don't fret you hearts,my friends.Tell you a famous remark,"If by life you were deceived, Don't be dismal, don't be wild! In the day of grief, be mild Merry days will come, believe."