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Today is my birthday. Pass today,I would been twenty-one years old. Yesterday, I called on some friends and some classmates to my birthday gather. They include my middle school classmate Song and Han . Song take his girlfriend that was a beatful girl that be called Rong . and The classmate of my colleage. In all eleven people . After two years ,I am nice to meet Song again , and. I am happy to recognized Song`s girlfriend . That is a wonderful day

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I invited eleven friends to my birthday party, including my middle school classmates Song and Han.
Song came with his girlfriend who was a beautiful girl called Rong.
Some of my college classmates also came here for celebration.
I've not seen Song for 2 years so I was so happy to meet him again.
Further more, It's marvellous to make friends with his girlfriend. What a wonderful day.