英语自我介绍的作文怎么写

我叫何雨龙,我13岁了,来自廊坊,我喜欢上网,喜欢吃汉堡.
My name is He Yulong,i'm 13 oid yeah.I from Lang Fang,i like on the internet.I like eat hamburger,too.
给我加分啊。

my name is He Yulong,I am 13 years old. I am from Lang Fang ,I Iike serfing the internet. I Like eating hamburgers,too 你的错了好几个语法 丢人

极度枫错了 My name is HeYulong.I'm 13 years old.I am from LangFang.I like eating hamburgers, and surfing the internet too.

My name is HeYulong.I'm a student,I'm 13 years old.My favourite food is hamburger.I like on the internet.
I am from LangFang.LangFang is a beautiful city.I like it very much.
This is me.Do you know?

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