请英文高手帮我看看改改，谢谢

用词不当或错误的我没给你删，只在后面用括号给你一个正确词汇，你自己替换。其它的连续错误，直接给你改正了。你是幼教，是吧？你的学校名肯定是不对的，给我中文名，我给你重新译。你教的孩子的年龄段，再告诉我，因为infant只限 1-2岁孩子。
等你答复，然后给你一个，完整正确的翻译。
Good morning/afternoon, Honorific（honorable) leadership(leaders), my dear teachers, my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH, and I am twenty three years old.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher, because it’s not just a heavenliness(holy) occupation, but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher，so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl. I have lots of interest, such as singing, dancing, drawing and so on.
In my spare time, I love to play the piano, but I am not good at it.
That's all, thank you for your attention.

Good morning/afternoon, Honorific leadership, my dear teachers, my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH, and I am twenty three years