外语好的进 进进 帮我修改修改作文

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/05 17:55:17
Dear Bunny September 11th
How are you doing ?Thank you you care.Everything here is OK.
I like my senior High school.Teacher and classmates are very enthusiastic and friendly.My method of teaching is nothing like junior high school .I attend a lecture conscientiously and record down what teacher said .In other words.I can study oneself.My classes is divided into 8grops,we hope become the most marvelous(棒)1 group .I shall attend the Sports Meeting .that is very cool!
Senior Middle school academic year and junior middle school very similar.A academic year was divided into two terms. We were impressed by students attitude to study. In a word,I must be just like their efforts(努力).
I miss you very much,I can looking forward to your the letter which you wrote !Wish you everything are well.

your friend
TOM

September 11th
Dear Bunny,
How are you?Thank you for your care.Everything here is OK.
I like my senior/high school.The teacher and classmates are very enthusiastic and friendly.My method of teaching is not like junior high school at all.I attended a lecture conscientiously and recorded down what the teacher said.In other words,I can study by myself.My class is divided into 8 groups,and we hope our group to become the most marvelous(棒)one.I shall attend the Sports Meeting .That is very cool!Senior school's academic year is similar with Middle school's. In a word,I must have efforts just like them.
I miss you very much,and I'm looking forward that I can see the letter which you write!Wish your everything is well.

Your friend/Yours,
TOM

P.S.你的英语语法很成问题啊...有的都看不懂你想表达什么了...