请问谁能帮我写一篇面试时的英文自我介绍,先谢谢大家了

Good morning,sir/madam
I'm number (几号你就填几号），my name is ( ).
I gruaduated from ( 你的学校），and my major is ( 你的专业).

The reason why i choose this job is that (你就写为什么喜欢啦）, and (再编你的可靠之处等等）

So do give a chance ,please ,
i won't let you be down.

阿，和我的专业一样啊 ~~~呵呵，我是你的师姐了。。我是搞工业方面的电气设计的。其实面试的时候还是要靠自己发挥的。光靠背没用的。面试管会问很多你料不所及的问题的：）
不过，我可以把我的自荐信给你看看的

Dear Sir or Madam,

First of all, it is very appreciated for you to look at my resume. I will graduate from Shanghai University of Engineering Science,where I major in Electrical engineering and it automate( modern building electricity). Due to my speciality, I’d like to look for a job of your company as an electrical engineer.

During past four years, since I made strict requirement to myself on each aspect, I have good command of all the compulsory and elective courses with a result of being ahead of many classmates. Besides learning a lot of Electric specialty kn