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In my opinion, I think that King Louis XIV was a great King, because when he was still a boy, he won lots of battles, that he is the glory of the nation. We adore him because he was the glory of the whole country. Without him, France would not be able to develop so fast. Without him, France might be consumed at that time.
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In my opinion, I think that King Louis XIV was a great King, for when he was rarely a boy, he won lots of battles, hence became the hero of his nation. We adore him because he was the glory of the whole country. Without him, France would not have been able to develop so fast. Without him, France might have been conqured at that time.

在我认为,国王路易十四是一位伟大的国王,当他很少一名男童,他赢得了许多战役,因此成了英雄,他的民族。我们朝拜他,因为他是荣耀全国。没有他,法国不会得以发展这么快。没有他,法国曾被conqured当时。