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Doing housework is really not as bad as it sounds.If we all do our part ,it will seem much less frightening.Why should your dirty dishes?Part of growing up is being able to take care of yourself.Doing little things around the house will show that you are becoming more mature and sufficrent.
Some of us think that we are too busy to do homework .But most parents work all day and expected to keep a clean house.It's too big a burden to put on by one or two people.Dividing housework among the whole family will make everryone's job easier.It seems much more manageable to have three or more people all work together to keep the house clean.

我认为前面一个答案倒数第二个用efficiently是不对的，首先它是个副词，不可能修饰名词JOB，意思应该是整个家庭来做家务会使每一个人的工作变得更简单，所以用EASY的比较级更好。还有第一个我觉得还是用REALLY比用REGARDED好，通观全文，第一句应该是表明作者自己的态度，做家务真的没有他听上去的那么糟糕，而不是说做家务被认为是没有它听上去的那么糟糕。
还有应该用becoming more mature and sufficrent. 而不是becoming much mature and sufficrent. 意思显然是变得更加成熟，显然多音节形容词的比较级应该是前面加more而不是much.

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