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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skill and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
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I believe It’s true idea “When a country develops its technology, the traditional skill and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.”Because that’s the step of history, nobody can stop it.
The human society always step forward, the new technology appears so fast, they just replace the old one for improve our life to form the new ways of life. Actually human being invent new technology for themselves, cause the old technology is not good as new one. So there’s no point to keep traditional skill. Except they really especial or other purpose for keep it. For example, museum like keep thousands or hundreds years ago stuff for human to know the history, provide people more idea about developing of a stuff and technology. All just encourage p
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I believe It’s a truth“When a country develops its technology, the traditional skill and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.”Because that’s one of steps during the whole history, no one can stop it.
The human society always go forward, once the new technology appeared they just replaced the old one. Becuase, the new technology will improve our life and create new ways of life. Actually human beings invent new technology for themselves and always try to improve them, so this cause the old technologies are not good as new ones. This is the reason why there’s no point to keep traditional skill except they really especial or we have other purpose and had to keep it. For example, some museums are build thousands or hundreds years ago and they will still be proteced from generation to generation. From museums humans will know the histories and tradiaton cultures. They will provide people more ideas about how to developi