UC知道大家帮我看看我的英语作业有什么错误，请指正！这是一个通知
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NOTICE
I am happy to inform you that there is a talk about "Traffic signs".If you want to know more knowlege about the traffic safe,,then you can attend this talk.It is spoken by a policeman.
There is some information about the this talk:
Date:27th Oct
Day:Wed
Start:10.10 p.m
Venue:Room 401,Building 2
Thank you for your kind attention!
Jiao wangzhen
2007.9.15
I am happy to inform you that there is a talk about "Traffic signs".If you want to know more knowlege about the traffic safe,,then you can attend this talk.It is spoken by a policeman.
There is some information about the this talk:
Date:27th Oct
Day:Wed
Start:10.10 p.m
Venue:Room 401,Building 2
Thank you for your kind attention!
Jiao wangzhen
2007.9.15
there is应该改为there will be吧，是将来时嘛，it is 也应该为it will be,还有about the talk 或about this talk都可以，但是this 前就不要加the了
演讲 speech
I am glad to inform you that there will be a speech on "Traffic Signs".If you want to know more about the traffic safe,welcome to present then.It is given by a policeman.
There is some information about this speech: