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Recently, there is a piece of hot news in the net and newspaper result many people criticizing a guardman’ actions about who affiliate a department store beat an old man who have no strength to resist. The reason why the guardman is so angry is the old man sit in front of store’s gate enjoy the air-condition. Many people feel surprise when they hear that, especially, the temperature in Chongqing as high as 39℃, so did I. if the store forbid these inelegant actions, they can persuade people who did that. The constitution don’t entitle people to beat another. The most shameful thing which the disgrace guardmen did is that he destroy the image of Chinese guardmen. Because of this incident, many innocent guardmen were to blame. the rotten apple injures its neighbours.
The Rotten Apple Injures Its Neighbors
Recently, there is a piece of hot news appeared in the net and newspaper make many people criticize a guardsman’ actions . This man worked in a department store, and he beat an old man who has no strength to resist. The guardsman was angry because he found the old man sit in front of store’s gate and enjoy the air-condition freely. Many people feel surprised when they hear it, so did I. The temperature in Chongqing as high as 39℃, if the store forbade these inelegant actions, they can persuade people not to do it .The constitution doesn’t entitle one person to beat another one .The most shameful thing that the disgrace guardsmen did was that he destroyed the image of Chinese guard men. Because of this incident, many other innocent guardsmen were to blame.It is just the rotten apple injures its neighbors.