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The vita juice has different kinds of tate,such as mango,milk and lemon tea.The taste is good and fresh.This product is not expensive,if you have three dollars, you can buy it.You must think it is impossible,but it is the fact. Now most of people when they thirsty they will buy vita product include me. They know the quality is good .In 2006,it even get the trusted brand in hong kong .Hong kong is a big market ,it sure can believe.The viat company contineously produce different taste that can attract the consumer especially teenage.
The vita juice has a lot of pigment and some of are too sweet .If we drinks in a long period it maybe unhealthy. It is not enough nature.Viat juice is not noble ,because you can buy it in every supermarket or store and the price is cheap. So it can't atrttract the rich people to buy it . Some of product is not protect environmental . It use much unregenerate resource. So it produce more and more rubbish in our earth ,this is not good.
The vita juice has a lot of pigment and some of are too sweet .If we drinks in a long period it maybe unhealthy. It is not enough nature.Viat juice is not noble ,because you can buy it in every supermarket or store and the price is cheap. So it can't atrttract the rich people to buy it . Some of product is not protect environmental . It use much unregenerate resource. So it produce more and more rubbish in our earth ,this is not good.
tate应该改为taste,lemon tea 后面加and so on 或etc.
fresh 改为refreshing.you can have it with only three dollars.You wouldn't believe,but that's true.now for most people including me,vita product would be the first choice when we are thirsty.
你写的有一点过于简单，我是说中文的意思就过于简单，建议加点心意。