帮帮忙,高手帮忙把这段话翻译成地道英语,谢绝机器翻译,感激不尽~!!!

亲爱的，如果你是用英文写，那么肯定是写给外国人看的。外国人不把什么青年团和共产党作为优秀学生的标志，甚至有的厌恶这样的组织。建议你只写你个人的优点

This schoolmate manner warm is sincere, has the very strong sense ofresponsibility and the collective sense of honor. Since thematriculation, has had a higher pursue in the political thinking,closes up on own initiative to the party organization and becomes anhonorable communist party member; Studies diligently diligently,positive is enterprising, has the corresponding specialized knowledgeand the professional ability; In the life open and bright is friendly,unites the schoolmate, is glad helps the person; Mass organizationwork performance prominent, holds the post of class leader and studentassociation cadre period, the work earnestly is responsible, to bepositive is willing to do, gets up the good model leading role.