UC知道一段英语
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帮忙看下这段英语有错误吗?如果有,请帮忙改一下,大小写和单词错误也算！(把原句写在前面)
I get up at a quarter past six,then I go to school ,it's 7:00．School begins at twenty past seven.I have lunch with my mother at 12:20.We go home at ten after five.After supper,I do my homework,it's five to seven.When is I go to bed?10:30.
I get up at a quarter past six,then I go to school ,it's 7:00．School begins at twenty past seven.I have lunch with my mother at 12:20.We go home at ten after five.After supper,I do my homework,it's five to seven.When is I go to bed?10:30.
时态不对。改成过去式，另外School begins 要换成Class began。
ten after five 不能用after 得用past，After supper 最好在中间加个having
I get up at a quarter past six,then I go to school .it's 7:00 when i get to school．School begins at twenty past seven.I have lunch with my mother at 12:20.I go home at ten past five.After supper,I do my homework at five to seven.When do I go to bed?10:30.