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Introduce myself

My name is DuanWeimeng.I study in Shaanxi Normal University Primary school, in class five grade six.
My school has two classroom buildings and a teacher's office building.My classroom is on the south building, fourth story.My classroom
has six rows.There are ten desks on each row.
I sit in the third row first desk.In front of me is WangHuaernuo, behind me is SongYicheng,to my left is YaoRong,to my right is Wang Zichong.WangZichong is my partner.We do pairwork together. I have many friends in my class.WangZichong,LiuYang,WangRen-
duo......they are my best friends.

Introduce myself
My name is Duan Weimeng. I am studying in Shannaxi Normal Iniversiry Primary School class five grade six.
My school has two classroom buildings and a teacher office building. My classroom is on the fourth story of the south building. My classroom has six rows with ten desks each. I am sitting at the first desk on third row. Wang H