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everyone needs friends as everyone needs air.if the world without air no one can live.if the world without friends nothing can be lively.but what can be real friends? what is friendship?
in my opinion,i don't think friend must be a person.it can be some other things such as reading ,writing ,diary ,computer and so on.as a real friend you must need each other,trust each other and understand each other.I think it's the most important because of friends relate.
friendship is an in-depth relationship between friends.sometime friendship is a lighthouse,when you are in dark he brings you home.sometime friendship is a armclock,when you are lazy in bed he wakes you up.sometime friendship is a box of chocolate,when you're sad he makes you sweet.that's what a friendship should be.
friendship is a comfortable situation like home.when you get home,you kick off your shoes,run to your bedroom and sigh,'i'm home,my own home.'
if the world without air no one can live.
这个句子缺少谓语
改为 if the world is without air ,no one can live.
i don't think friend must be a person这种句子最好用否定转移.而且must在做不一定这个意思的时候,否定要换做need.泛指"人"的时候最好用man.
改为,i think a friend needn't be a man.
because of friends relate是动词,这里应该是名词 relation
sometime friendship is a box of chocolate应该是sometimes
friendship is a comfortable situation like home 这里应该是就象在家里的感觉一样,并不是说象加,所以home前面加at.
kick off 是开球的意思,,脱鞋是take off.
'i'm home,my own home.'意思是我在家.
改为I'm at home,my own home.
整体上还是不错的,再送你一句话
A friend in need is a friend indeed!
友谊在我的眼睛
每个人都需要朋友，因为每个人都需要air.if世界空中无人能live.if世界上没有朋友，可以lively.but什么，可真正的朋友？友谊是什么？
我觉得，我不觉得朋友必须person.it可以其他一些事情，如阅读，写作，日记，电脑等on.as一个真正的朋友，你一定要互相信任，互相理解，每个other.i觉得它的最重要的，因为朋友的关系。
友谊是一个深入的关系friends.sometime友谊是一座灯塔，当你在黑暗中，他带你home.sometime友谊是armclock ，当你懒在床上，他醒来，你up.sometime友谊是一盒巧克力