在线等，高分急问：给上月来访过我校的外国教育代表团的信怎么写？

1。 坚决不要用“How are you!” 。 英文正规信函都是直接进入话题。可以有“Thank you for your...”客套话， 而“How are you”是偶尔用于很熟的朋友间的很随意的招呼语。也不要说“我们非常欢迎”， 人都来过了，还欢迎啥？所以给你译成了“在您及贵代表团访问期间， 我为能够尽地主之谊接待你们感到非常荣幸”

2。 用“I”, 而不是"we"以示负责 （我知道你是代表你的领导，可你受负责的领导的授意，而且应署他/她的名）

3。我加了一句"我深信在贵代表团访问期间我们之间建立的友谊是双方进一步合作的良好开始"。而删略了你原来的“双方是在友好轻松的氛围中结下友谊关系，这是双方关系的良好开始”

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Dear XXX,

It was a great honor for us to host you and the other members of your delegation during your visit to my university last month. I am convinced that the personal friendship between you and us established during your visit is a good start for further collaborations between our universities. It is our hope that we keep in close contact and that the two universities would eventually establish a partnership as sister universities.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Sincerely yours,

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