请帮忙检查简历翻译是否合适，TKS，定重谢

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Firstly,it is really my great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.Let me introduce myself briefly, my English name is ***, I come form ****, I am twenty five years old , I graduated from *** technical secondary school in 2001. In spite of my low degree, I am still confident for this position. I am honest, open-minded, and cooperative.
I have in the shoe business since 2002, during the past four years, I have acquired a lot knowledge in shoe business, including technical, management, development, shipping and the rule of international business. .I was full of energy in life, and I look forward to a broader field to show my talents. I am not satisfied with the current level of knowledge, i would like to challenge myself, Therefore, I wish to join your company. I will work diligently to do my own job, make every effort to contribution to this position.
Thank you very much indeed for this interview.

Firstly -> First

In spite of my low degree, I am still confident for this position.

这句话不要，显得你底气不足。

technical -> technologies / techniques

I was full of energy -> I'm very energetic

I am not satisfied with the current level of knowledge 同理，删了，面试的时候没人会同情你知识不足的

I will work diligently to do my own job -> on my job

First of all,it is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview.Let me introduce myself briefly. My name is ***, and I come from ****. I am twenty five years old . I graduated from *** technical secondary school in 2001. In spite of my low degree, I am still confident for this position. I am honest, open-minded, and cooperative.
I have been in the shoe business since 2002. During the past four years, I have acquired a lot knowledge in shoe business, including technical, management, development, shipping, and the rule of international business. .I am full of energy in l