这句话这么写对么?

She succeeded in all major courses and won the outstanding student award and the college scholarship.
这个句子这样写没有语法错误,第一个and连接两个并列谓语succeeded与won;第二个and连接两个宾语一起放在won后面;
如果你想让句子语法正确又有突出谓语而不重复用词,可以这样:She succeeded in all major courses and won the outstanding student award as well as the college scholarship.(其中as well as是"及"的意思,可以连接两个并列成分)

可以阿，完全可以啊

同意楼上。两个and很正常呀，想并列多少个就可以并列多少个句子成分。

She succeeded in all major courses with the outstanding student award and the college scholarship.

it's shorter and better.