请高手指点!!!!谢!!!

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一小段话。看看能不能改漂亮点。如果有语法错误请指正。谢啦。
I'd like to own a chihuahua.I can feed him,play with him,dress him up if he want.I'll promenade him along the Maldives's seashore.
We lay on the ground,seeing the ascene of white after a heavy snow.
Running with him before both sunset and sunrise is must be cool.
Swimming with him in a mountain lake is one of my plans.
Getting a chihuahua consummates my happiness.I can't wait.

i wish to accompany with chihuhua.I will feed him,dress him up,play with him to meet what he wants to do.i'll take a walk with him along the maldives' seashore.
we lay on the lawn,,saw the silver world of snow.it's cool for us to run together with the sunsets or sunrises.I plan to swim with him the moutain lake.
I can't wait any more.I am really eager to get a chihuhua.

dress him up if he want(wants)
Running with him before both sunset and sunrise is must be cool. (It must be cool to run with him before both sunset and sunrise is must be cool.)
别笑话我,自己的意见

I'd like to own a chihuahua.
I'll feed him carefully, play with him happily, dress him up earnestly if he wants.
I'll promenade(它是不及物动词) with him along the Maldives's seashore.
We lay on the beach, viewed the ascene of white after a heavy snow. (不知道ascene是什么?)
It should be cool if we are running before sunrise or after sunset.
Swimming with hi