请英语好的进!用在线翻的勿进!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/19 23:28:16
请大家翻译两句话:
1.如果你们订单数量在两英尺集装箱以上,我们可以给你打九五折!!
2.我们的名片已经发完了,这是我们公司的详细联系方式,如果你有什么问题可以和我们联系。

1.If your order quantity is loaded in more than a two-feet container, you can have 5 percent off.

2.Please note that our bussiness cards have been dispensed out.
Here is the contact details of our company. Should you have any questions, please don't hestitate to contact us.

techcom3其实翻译能够表示意思,但是不是商务英语的格式和语气,他的翻译更加趋向于普通写作,不适合商务环境,没有应有对客户的礼貌。
我搞外贸的,经常写这些email,这样写应该比较礼貌而且达意。

1. If your order is higher than a two-feet container, you can have 5 percent off.

2. There are no more business cards left for us, this is a detail contact information, if you have any questions, you can contact us.

1.If your order is higher than two-feet container,you can get 95% discount.

2.There have no any more business cards for us, this is our contact infoamtion, if you have any further questions, please contact us.

大哥要说的是20尺集装箱吧?别搞错了啊