help with my English diary.

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Tomorrow is another day,so we must hold the time.If you are hard-working,you will find how happy you are!If you aren't,you will feel boring and tired.Why not hold this time and do something what you enjoy doing it?

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Tomorrow is a new day,so we must hold the time.If you are hard-working,you will find how happy you are!If you aren't,you will feel borid and tired.Why not hold the time and do something that you enjoy doing it?

明天是另外的一个日子，因此，我们一定拥有时间。如果你是勤奋的,你将会发现你是多么快乐!如果你 aren't,你将会觉得无聊和疲累。为什么这次不举行而且做某事你喜欢做它的?