英语错句 怎样纠正?

the backpack was given to me by my father. 用被动句，而且要用过去时

可用被动语态：
The backpack is given to me by my father.

也可用主动语态：
My father gives the backpack to me.
= My father gives me the backpack.

显然这种表达方式是典型的chinglish洋泾浜英语嘛，完全不符合英语国家的表达习惯，要修改的话就参照以上朋友的了