我写的英语日记有错的帮我纠正?
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 22:03:51
今天天气很好,它既不热也不冷,本来我想与我的朋友一起打篮球的,但是很遗憾,他们都不在家,因此我不得不放弃打篮球在家玩电脑还有一些时间背单词,真是无聊的一个早上。
有什么错句的帮我纠正一下谢谢。
It's a fine day today.It's neither too hot nor too cold.Originally I wanted to play baskteball with my friends,but it was a pity that they were not at home,so I have to give up my idea of playing baskteball and play computer games and recite English words at home.What a boring morning it is!
修改如下:
It's fine today. It's neither too hot nor too cold. Originally I thought of playing baskteball with my friends, but the pity was they were not at home. So I had to give it up. I had to stay at home playing computer and reciting English words for some time. What a boring morning!
It's fine day today, neither too hot nor too cold. Originally I wanted to play baskteball with my friends, but it was a pity that they were not home. So, I had to give up and stayed at home playing computer and reciting English words. What a boring morning!
today's weather is great,is not hot or cold.Originally I wanted to play basketball with my friends,but so sad,t