小段英文修改

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妈妈这几天给了很多在日常生活上有用的建议给我,我必须尽快做一个在生活上有条理,利落的姑娘.

很多时候,在日常生活上我都处于混乱状态,比如衣着\饮食上面,我都不能把自己控制在一个好的状态下.其实在我认为,随着年龄的增长,我的习惯应该越来越好才对,但是事实上却不是.所以,我必须改变周围的一些事情.
首先,我要买个衣橱把我的衣服整理的整齐一些.但是,衣橱买回来以后,整理的工作却交给了妈妈,事后,真有些不好意思呢.啊!我伟大的妈妈!
再就是我的日常饮食了,呵呵,其实按时就好,多些水果,多些蔬菜,切记哦!
其实还有很多,但是我不想写了,今天就到这里吧!
Mom give me some useful suggestion in the dayly life,I need get myself to be a spiffy girl as soon as possible.
somtimes I am so babelism in the dayly life,just like apparel,diet,,,I can't control myself in a good condition.To my way of thinking,along with my growing age,the habit must became better and better,but the fact is oppsite.therefore,I must change something around me.
First,buy a wardrobe,to tidy up my clothing into orderliness,but,the tidy work is delived to my mother,after that, I am feeling so embarrassed....oh!my great MomMom~~~~~
Second,for my diet,aha,on schedule is ok~more vegetable~more fruit~ be sure to keep in mind!
In fact,I have many many

Mother these days gave have been very many in the daily life theuseful suggestion gives me, me must make to have orderliness as soonas possible in the life, agile girl.

Very many times, I all is at the chaotic condition in the dailylife, for instance above the attire \ diet, I all cannot controloneself under a good condition. actually believed in me, along withthe age growth, my custom should be more and more good only then to,but actually is not in fact periphery. therefore, I must change somematters.
First, I must buy a wardrobe neat somewhat which reorganizesmine clothes. but, the wardrobe buys back after, reorganizes the workhas actually given mother, afterwards, some is really embarrassed.! Mygreat mother!
Again was my daily diet, ha-ha, on time was actually good, manyfruits, many vegetables, were sure to remember oh!
Actually also has very many, but I did not want to write, todayarrives here!