帮忙看两个句子 谢谢好心人

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/11 06:25:10
1.The only thing could they do is finishing the work on time.
2.Never married people and divorced people in the year 2000 were a little bit more than these people in 1970.

问题是:1.only提前的倒装句,前面的这个the 有问题吗?
2. 自己感觉句子有些冗长, 能否精简一下, 还有 these 能不能改成those ?

我和回答者:gkgk2002 的看法完全类似.

第一个要看你强调的东西 在这里没必要
they could do就可以了

第二个个人觉得改成
Unmarried and divorced people in the year 2000 were a bit more than those in 1970.
比较好
首先 这两个地方的people都是废话 不要
尤其是最后面的一个people是典型的中式英语
little/bit选留一个 差不多的 没必要用litte bit太啰嗦了!
必须使用those不能使用these
the year 其实也可以不要
were的话要看语境了

第一句没问题
The number of people who haven't married in the year 2000 is larger than that of 1970.

我决得第一句应该是THEY COULD DO吧。。
不存在倒装的问题啊。
THEY COULD DO 定语修饰THE ONLY THING

第2句改成UNMARRIED 的比较好吧。
而且也不需要用WERE
因为数字的比较没必要用过去吧
确实如你所说
应该用THOSE 不该用THESE

2)这句话整体有问题
those 应改为those,表泛指。
The number of unmarried or divorced people in 2000 is larger than in 1970.
1)The only thing could they do is to finish the work on time.
the必有