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Due to the influence of my father, who is a drawing amateur.When I was four years old, I had been passionate about drawing. My earliest memory of this is doodling and cutting up paper to make new images. As I grew older,I can remember spending most of time just drawing according to my imagination and being inspired to make and design anything and everything! My first steps in this direction began with winning the copper Prize in my grade school time. It is the Local drawing competition. The attraction of arts has driven me to demand a higher level in this field since then, although I was aware that there is no 'best' in arts, but simply 'better'.
After I entered the junior high school, I studied hard because of my ambitious nature, and thus was always in the top few percent in my year group.At the same time,I begin to go the specialized studio for study paint. The Strained studying life, make me have not time to think.I can’t find the right direction for me to take

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