大一的写作翻译,HELP ME!!

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题目是 I FEEL DISAPPOINTED WHEN……
我表达的意思是:当朋友远离我却没有多说话时我最失望,当我高中毕业,同学们都要到不同的城市上不同的大学,可是他们有的在分离的时候除了微笑没有说一句话,即使以后会用网络,手机联系,可是我还是觉得在分离时应该表达依依不舍和祝福
大家帮我翻译一下,不要看我下面写的,我觉得很不地道!!

这是我写的,有明显错误大家给我说说吧! I feel diappointed when my classmates leve me without words.When I graduated from high school,all of my classmates will go to different univercities,different cities.But some of them did not say anything to me even though we can get in touch with each other by internet and phone.But I still think they could say something to express wishes and(不舍得)
谢谢!!!!!!!!!!!!

I feel disappointed, when best friends left me without saying goodbye;when classmates were parted from each other to different cities for further education,I wished them to express well-wishing and the reluctance to part, disappointedly I got nothing but smiles, although we could keep touch by network or phone from then on , at that moment,all my wish was the really natural expression form their heart! How much I hope they told to me"take care,buddy!"

i feel so sad as my mate leave me alone without any comments. that is ridiculous man ,since i graduted my high school. hips of my mates went to different places. Some of them gave me a smile instead of leaving comments.even thought, we could chat in the icq or net, however i still believe it should be much more warm once we seperated. at least some greeting and wishes..actually, those people are sucks, get out of my life.

虽然不地道,但只要正确的表达了意思就行!你的翻译有的时态没对!我觉得应该这样:I feel disappointed when my classmates left me without