英语改错《谢谢》

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Here I am in Australia, there are a lot of foreigners come from the different contries. I am a Chinese who is from the developing country but fertile. Many students come from China, but I feel hard to say that all of them love this country.
Some Chinese often say that China is a poor and laggard country. Because it’s difficult to get the visa to go aboard; The government there is full of corruption; The people there are impolite and so on.
As everyone knows that China is a large country with a huge population. We can’t decide everyone has high awareness. "There are all kinds of fish in the sea". However it makes me become more concern about Chinese history and politics.With the development of China, all right and wrong decisions are the parts of China. We can’t complain our forefathers, we can’t complain our past leaders. We are the children of Yellow Emperor. No children can not love their mothers whatever kinds of the mother is.
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Here I am in Australia, there are a lot of foreigners come (改为coming) from the(去掉the) different contries. I am a(去掉a) Chinese who is from the developing country but fertile. Many students come from China, but I feel hard to say that all of them love this country.
Some Chinese often say that China is a poor and laggard country. Because it’s difficult to get the visa to go aboard; The government there is full of corruption; The people there are impolite and so on.
As everyone knows that(去掉that) China is a large(用big好一些) country with a huge(改为large) population. We can’t decide everyone has high awareness. "There are all kinds of fish(用复数fishes) in the sea". However it makes me become more concern about Chinese history and politics.With the development of China, all right and wrong decisions are the parts of China. We can’t complain our forefathers, we can’t complain our past leaders. We are the children of Yellow Emperor. No children can not love their mothers wha