UC知道初二英语作文修改
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A Happy Holiday
My parents and I went to HongKong in this year the National Day Holiday for four days.We all enjoyed ourselves.The first day,we went to the Ocean Park.It's very beautiful!We saw many different kinds of fish.We went to Dysney Land and played a lot of game in the second day. The third day, we went shopping. HongKong is a busy city.There are lots of beautiful things to buy.We bought a lot of beautiful things.The last day, we visited friends and had a party in their house. What a nice holiday it is!
A Happy Holiday
My parents and I went to HongKong in this year the National Day Holiday for four days.We all enjoyed ourselves.The first day,we went to the Ocean Park.It's very beautiful!We saw many different kinds of fish.We went to Dysney Land and played a lot of game in the second day. The third day, we went shopping. HongKong is a busy city.There are lots of beautiful things to buy.We bought a lot of beautiful things.The last day, we visited friends and had a party in their house. What a nice holiday it is!
这篇作文用的是过去式，那么所有的动词和谓语都要用过去式。“we went shopping. HongKong is a busy city.”改为“was”“There are lots of beautiful things to buy”改为“were”第一句语法也不通。“My parents and I went to HongKong in this year the National Day Holiday for four days”改为“My parents and I went to HongKong on the National Day of this year for four days”最后一句“What a nice holiday it is!”去掉“it is
”就行了。“We went to Dysney Land and played a lot of game in the second day. ”改为“on the second day”