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But the fact is opposite,I had changed my opinion after make use of these products in my real life.for example:
I For the stainless steel canister,it is not hermetic when we use it to save food,moreover ,it's get rustiness because of the salinity from the food.
II For the oil bottle,though the appearance is beautiful,and it's useless,the oil can effusing from the top joint when the bottle get incline.
because of these defects,I got hurry-scurry all my cooking time last night.
why this broblem being?it is obvious that have tow aspect,one is low technology by manufacturer,the other is too neglect in the step of Q-check by our company. furthermore,the lack on product design is a causation too.
Such these let me enter the thought about famous brand.whether the design or manuf
I always believe that the products export from our company are excellent at all times.The high price surely must be supported by the proven high quality .
But the fact is beyond my expectation.I had changed my opinion after making use of these products in my daily life.For example,
the stainless steel canister is not hermetic when we use it to save food,but it's geting rustiness because of the salinity from the food.
For the oil bottle,though the appearance is beautiful,it's useless,the oil can effuse from the top joint when the bottle is incline.
because of these defects,I got hurry-scurry all my cooking time last night.
Why these problems occured?It is obvious that two aspects exist,one is low manufacturing quality,the other is the factory is neglective in the procedure of Q-check. Furthermore,the defect in product design is a causation too.
Such problems make me think about the famous brand.Either the design or manufac