急急，英文自我介绍

My name is Qiushi Xu. I'm 24 years old, my hometown is in Tsingtao, China. guaduated from Tsingtao Technology University, my college major is advertisement. After guaduated from the university i wanted to study further, so i came to Korea and chose Guangyun University. if i can be admitted successfully, i will definitely try my best to study hard. Thank you

我在美国呆了6年了...楼上的哦.. 我发现你写的里面有一些错误.. 主要是你要把前面一部分写成过去式.. 因为事情已经发生了..

楼上的~~~~居然用软件翻译~~~语法驴头不对马嘴。。。太不厚道了

我叫徐秋实，今年24，我的家乡是中国的青岛，毕业于青岛科技大学，大学的专业是广告学。大学毕业后想继续深造所以来到了韩国，选择了光云大学。如果能顺利的进入光云大学。我一定会努力的学习。谢谢

My name is Xu Qiushi. I'm 24 now, and my hometown is Tsingtao, China. Graduating from Tsingtao Technology Universty, I chose advertisement as my major. I want to study further, so I come to South Korea and choose Yunguang University. If my application can be admitted successfully, I will try my best to study diligently. Thank you!!

放心~~偶现在就在申请美国大学~~翻译的质量你不用担心啦~~~o(∩_∩)o...

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