介绍国家的英语小短文

China is a developing country that lies in the east of Asia, with a population of nearly 1.3 billion and an area of 9.6 million square kilometres.
中国是一个位于亚洲东部的发展中国家,人口接近13亿,国土面积960万平方公里.
Having had one of the world's 4 biggest ancient civilizations, China's 5,000-year history still fascinates many people.
曾拥有世界四大古文明之一的中国,5000年的历史仍吸引着许多人.
Today China has become a leading country in the world's culture, technology and economics and people all over the world admire it.
今天它已成为世界文化、技术和经济强国,受到各国人民的敬佩.

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