UC知道求高手修改英文
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/10 05:21:37
请哪位高人帮忙看看，下面这段英文的公司简介有什么比如语法，单词等用的不妥的地方帮忙修改一下
xxx Co.,Ltd. Is a technical service enterprise , which provides the technical service and the technical consultation about environmental pollution control , automatic continuous monitoring , fluid control and seawater desalination. The company has specialized technical team ; pays attention to the development tendency of automatic monitors in domestic and foreign ; focus on the research and development of the new environmental monitoring technology . The company applied for and obtained the Environment protection facilities operations certificate , and accumulated the massive experiences about the technology of environment continuous monitoring , environmental pollution control , fluid control and so on . we also achieved certain results.
xxx Co.,Ltd. Is a technical service enterprise , which provides the technical service and the technical consultation about environmental pollution control , automatic continuous monitoring , fluid control and seawater desalination. The company has specialized technical team ; pays attention to the development tendency of automatic monitors in domestic and foreign ; focus on the research and development of the new environmental monitoring technology . The company applied for and obtained the Environment protection facilities operations certificate , and accumulated the massive experiences about the technology of environment continuous monitoring , environmental pollution control , fluid control and so on . we also achieved certain results.
没什么大问题，只是有两个地方，你看是不是需要改一下？
1、The company has specialized technical team.
应该家定冠词 "a" 应该是“has a team”吧？
2、We also achieved certain results.
整段文字的主语是“xxx Co.,Ltd.”，所以这儿我觉得不该是“We”，而应该是“It”比较合适。