UC知道自己设计的英语演讲程序。望各位指出不足。谢谢你们
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我是一名初三学生。最近轮到我英语课上台演讲了。
因为很想把握好这次机会。所以恳请大家帮忙。
主要是小弟我英语一般般啦。各位大鸟请赐教。
先声明，你看到的可能不是正经的英语演讲稿。
因为我想比较新颖点，所以自己加了些环节进去。
大家看看有什么不合理帮我指出顺便修改啊。谢谢大家。
Good morning boys and girls.Today I'm very glad to be here to show my spoken English to you.
The title of my speech is My Biggest Dream.Before I give you a speech,I want to konw that some of your drames.
Who can show your dreams with me?（与同学互动）环节：两名同学回答。
OK.Just now we all hear that both of them have different dreams.And what do you think of their dreams？Are they perfect?
(此处我想调动同学们的兴趣，主要是问他们的梦想是普通平凡的还是很精彩的，值得期待。但我英语水平欠佳。望大家帮忙。）
And do you want to know that what is my biggest dream?（引出自己的演讲）
（同学回答：Of course.）If you want to know,please listen carefully.
（接下来就是正式演讲了。大家看看演讲稿有没有什么需要补充的可以更加地精彩。）
My biggest dreams
We all have dreams. Different people have different dreams. Some people dream of being rich or famous, some people dream of
开始写得不错，也没有太大的语法错误，但是最后的If I can do it改成 If i could do that 比较有礼貌。而且最后结尾有点仓促，最好改一下，其他都没什么问题了，祝你成功。
I give you a speech 把A改成THE 因为这个演讲你已经提过了,所以是特指
Who can show your dreams with me?把WITH改为FOR或者整个句子改为 who can tell me about your dreams?
OK.Just now we all hear that both of them have different dreams.And what do you think of their dreams？Are they perfect? 把ALL去掉 把HAVE 改为HAS
some people dream of 把some people 改为others
staying young forever把staying 改为keeping
And I will be able to 把be able to 改为can
Beijingand learn more about China在learn 前加and
I try to read English novels and magazine改为I have tried to...
We all know前加as
speak beautiful English 在speak 后加a
I can speak English very
well 改为I can speak a beautiful English
这些仅仅是我个人的看法,你要不同意也不要紧,呵呵加油!祝你在演讲当中成功!
*Before I give you a speech,I want to konw that some of your drames.
*Before giving you a speech,I would like to know some of your dreams..
Great