这个英语句子有毛病吗？

来源：百度知道编辑：UC知道时间：2024/05/10 09:03:05

I am so happy that I have the chance to love you and to be loved with you.
请各位朋友帮忙看看这个句子有毛病吗？
我的英语比较差，麻烦大家了

厄~~语法上没错，但是句子太生硬了。
建议改成
I am so happy that I have the chance to love you and have your love.

happy后面加个逗号

be loved by you

i am so happy that i have the chance to love you and to be loved by you.

and后的to去掉.
be loved by you