高手帮我检查一下我的英语翻译(中译英)

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这是我翻译的,有些地方不合适,请帮我指正。多谢拉
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Advices for life
第一篇 给正在积蓄知识能量的你 第1封信
Chapter 1 To you accumulating knowledge The first letter

现在是夯实你的人生基础的时候
如果你能十分有意义地利用好这段
时间,把这段时间的所得积蓄起来,到
了将来,这些积蓄将会生出很多利息,
让你得到丰厚的回报。
It's time for you to strengthen your life.If you make good

use of the time to accumulate what you get everyday,then it

will pay you back by generating more interest in the future.

我想让你知道的事太多,但是,没有一件事比现在要告诉你的更

重要,那就是时间的宝贵与如何有效利用时间的方法。尽管每个人都

会说:“要珍惜时间”,然而,在我所见到的人当中,真正了解如何

“珍惜”时间的人并不多,最后真正做到这一点的人就更少了。
I have many things to tell you,but there 's nothing more

important now than the preciousness of the time and how to

use it effectively.Although everyone can tell you "value

your time",there is few one who can understand the

precious

to you who are accumulating knowledge.
..
There are many things I want you to know, but there's nothing more important than the things Im telling you right now,that is the precious of time ..
Athough everone knows to say treasure your time, there are few people who really know how to treasure their time..

Chapter 1 To you accumulating knowledge The first letter
Now is to carry out your times of basal life
If you can the very meaningful land utilization use like this
Time, get up the income savings of this time, arrive
In the future, these savingses will living an a lot of interests,Let you get big repay.

I want make the matter that you know too many, but, have no a matter to want to tell than now your more important, that is horary precious with how make use of a horary method effectively.Though everybody will say:"Want to cherish time", however, at the person seen by me in the middle, real understand how to cherish a