大家帮我翻译一下这个句子好不好啊？

在科学技术迅速发展的时代，电脑将会发挥更为重要的作用。拥有属于自己的计算机，将会使我们的生活更加丰富多彩。

In the era of rapid development of science and technology, computers will play a more important role. It will make our life more colorful if we have our own computers.

The rapid development of science and technology in the era of computers will play an even more important role. Have their own computers, will make our life more colorful.