看看这段话，有什么错误吗？

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This paper aims at acquiring a knowledge of English vocabulary teaching in middle school and first it stresses the importance of vocabulary teaching in middle school according to the ana1ysis of the benefits of vocabulary study in English reading and communicating. And then the paper points out the drawbacks of several traditional vocabulary teaching methods in middle school after enumerating the disadvantages of some vocabulary teaching methods.

你的运气很好，我的一位美国教授帮你改了：）

This paper aims at acquiring a knowledge of English vocabulary teaching in middle school. First, it stresses the importance of vocabulary teaching in middle school according to the analysis of the benefits of vocabulary study in English reading and communication. The paper goes on to enumerate the disadvantages of some vocabulary teaching methods, then points out the drawbacks of several traditional vocabulary teaching methods in middle school.

现在就没有语法和表达错误啦：）

对不起,我的英语水平不够,看不懂.