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Introduce myself
Hello ! I’m Sun Xuemei . I graduated from Changchun Vocational Institute of Technology . I’m major in Business English .
My father is a indoor stylist , and my mother is a finery saleswoman .
I’m going to America for struding .
Why are you going to America ?
Because I want to get a job like translator here . So I go there to wide my view , and I’ll get an excellence English condition .
It’s a chance to get fresh knowledge .
Hello ! I’m Sun Xuemei . I graduated from Changchun Vocational Institute of Technology . I’m major in Business English .
My father is a indoor stylist , and my mother is a finery saleswoman .
I’m going to America for struding .
Why are you going to America ?
Because I want to get a job like translator here . So I go there to wide my view , and I’ll get an excellence English condition .
It’s a chance to get fresh knowledge .
Self-introduction
Hello ! I’m Sun Xuemei . I graduated from Changchun Vocational Institute of Technology . I’m major in Business English.
My father is an indoor stylist, and my mother is a finery saleswoman.
I’m going to America for studying.
Why are you going to America?
Because I want to get a job like translator. So I go there to enlarge my view, and I’ll get an excellence English condition.
It’s a chance to get fresh knowledge.